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TECHNIQUE
COULD but this be brought |
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| Into your ken,—that the technique is thought! |
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| Escape from “Style,” the notion men can use |
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| Words without thoughts,—so wrench and so abuse |
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| The innocent language to their ends that they |
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| Will seem to be respectful, honest, gay, |
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| Grave, or what else—and all the glorious while |
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| The authors’ selves sit with the wise and smile: |
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| “’T is but a trick, ’t is words, it is a style!” |
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| Your technique, then, is thought, just as I say. |
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| And if you ’ll write a poem, there ’s no way |
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| But first to think it clearly; pin your mind |
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| Upon your thought; fasten it there, and bind |
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| The thought into your heart: when your veins burn and flow |
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| With love or hate, the thoughts to music go, |
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| Melt into music, and pour fully out |
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| In a rich flood;—but to take thought about |
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| The “music” of your words, ’t is matter quite |
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| Beyond your conscious power! For rhymes, they ’re right |
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| Or wrong according as they hear, not look |
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| When printed by a printer in a book! |
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| And their “correctness” may be measured best, |
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| And indeed only, by a certain test: |
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| That, namely, for rebellions,—which are so |
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| Until they have succeeded, when they go |
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| By quite another name. Forget not, too, |
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| That every English poet known to you, |
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| That is to say all of them, rhymed just as |
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| The spirit took them and their pleasure was, |
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| And, masters that they were, rhymed “falsely,” so |
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| As now no poetaster dares to do! |
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PURPOSE
So then, at last, let me awake this sleep |
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| And languor of yourself: it is too deep, |
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| And ’t is too long! |
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| Oh, I would have you look |
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| With judgment on your life, and not to brook |
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| The less in art, as not in truth;—forgive |
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| Much in you now I can, never that you less live! |
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| I may put by whatever choice of themes, |
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| But not this air of being by rich dreams |
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| Roofed over, and floored under, and walled in. |
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| As Eastern princes in a palanquin |
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| Luxuriously ride, by eunuchs round |
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| Held and supported, lifted from the ground, |
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| And softly borne,—so you, on the mild shoulders, |
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| Effeminate, of dreams!—Your spirit moulders; |
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| The freshness of your soul withers away |
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| As roses do that cannot find the day. |
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| Oh, free yourself!—take up your life and share |
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| The splendor of this day, the world’s great air, |
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| And this new land’s delight,—this land that we |
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| Adore, this people, this great liberty |
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| Of nations in new birth,—a happy shower |
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| Of golden States,—a many-blossomed flower!— |
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| Now grown a Commonwealth, whose strength and state |
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| And health are dangerous to all that hate |
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| Freedom, and fatal to all those who’d be |
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| Sunk in the dark of Time’s abysmal sea, |
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| Safe anchored in the past—safe dead!—that none |
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| Might longer make them fear a change beneath the sun, |
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| To fright them with new good.—But oh, to those |
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| Whose blood within them leaps and laughs and flows; |
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| To all who proudly hope; to all who fain |
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| With their right hands and with their heart and brain |
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| Would throne the right, and make the good to reign; |
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| To all who’d lift man up, and who, heart-free, |
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| Haste toward the light,—this Land and State should be |
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| Dear as their life!—And to her sons should she |
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| Be born again in love, since with her noblest blood |
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| And her right hand of youth she smote the brood |
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| Of her own loins, nested in servitude, |
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| Shadowing the world’s detraction with fair peace. |
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| Dear mother of her sons, whose wealth is these; |
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| Her more than gold, their valor, mercy, truth; |
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| Her mighty age, immortal in their youth:— |
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| Dear light of hope, oh, needs she not to be |
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| Forever saved into new liberty? |
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| The fallen blood of martyrs is in vain |
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| If ours be not as free to fall again! |
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| But her salvation is a rigorous task, |
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| Eternally accomplishing.—I ask |
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| You, therefore, as one owing more than most |
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| To her, who is your happiness and boast, |
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| That you cast from you all that will not wake |
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| Men’s hearts from sensual sleep:—for her great sake |
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| Put by the velvet touch, the easy grace, |
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| The fingers dreaming on the lyre, the face |
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| Forgetful, listening to light melodies; |
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| Cease thou thy toying with the hours, and cease |
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| This riot of thy youth, this wantoning |
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| With all the sap and spirit of thy Spring. |
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| Not twice that vendure’s given thee; the Tree |
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| Of Life not twice shall blossom; and to be |
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| Young, ’t is to be in heaven, ’t is to be |
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| Full of ambition, filled with hot desire, |
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| Pregnant with life, and steeped in such a fire |
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| AS sets a world in hope!—Oh, could I say |
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| That which I would, you could not say me nay. |
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| But let your country plead with you; give heed |
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| To her dumb call; sow the eternal seed |
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| Of Truth, and Righteousness, and Love;—though you |
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| Shall be, as poets should, known to but few, |
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| Yet your reward is great: it is to be |
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| Sown in the hearts of men, to make men free; |
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| And in your thoughts to be your land’s firm stay, |
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| And her salvation in a falling day, |
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| More than dread cannon, than bright thousands more: |
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| For thoughts, like angels, wage eternal war. |
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